Hey I was actually suprised :)

This actually is pretty good for your first song, hell it's better than my first, you probably will get much better with time.
I guess you used Fruity loops? because I recongnized the gate synth, preset in sytrus right? :). Nothing wrong with using presets but try to alter them a bit so you don't instantly recongnize them.
keep it up mate! Now do me a favor and check my stuff out. :D

Have a good one - Ene

Nice

This is good. But I have to agree with the first poster. Mastering! it don't really sound right in some areas play around with the EQ and see what u can come up with, and gods sake never have an lone snarefill:P

But what I would really like is to hear some original tunes from you, and not remixes.

well thats my 2 cents. keep it up. you can only get better:D

Cool

I liked this one. very smooth and the melody is an mood setter:P. But as someone else said, ir could some more flesh on it's bones, and your kick could in my oppinion be a bit deeper.

Great work

-Ene