Hey I was actually suprised :)
This actually is pretty good for your first song, hell it's better than my first, you probably will get much better with time.
I guess you used Fruity loops? because I recongnized the gate synth, preset in sytrus right? :). Nothing wrong with using presets but try to alter them a bit so you don't instantly recongnize them.
keep it up mate! Now do me a favor and check my stuff out. :D
Have a good one - Ene
This is good. But I have to agree with the first poster. Mastering! it don't really sound right in some areas play around with the EQ and see what u can come up with, and gods sake never have an lone snarefill:P
But what I would really like is to hear some original tunes from you, and not remixes.
well thats my 2 cents. keep it up. you can only get better:D
Thanks for the advice!
I have trouble making my own melodies, they always sound SO bad! Do you have any tips, please PM me some. :)
I liked this one. very smooth and the melody is an mood setter:P. But as someone else said, ir could some more flesh on it's bones, and your kick could in my oppinion be a bit deeper.
wtf the kik needs to be even more deeper!!! oh noe!!!!
Your songs is just soooo fast! to the point of it almost being annoying after a while. I know this one isn't done yet, but slow it down somewhere so you can catch your breath:P
Otherwise it sounds very Dj Sash, can't really comment on much more.
But nice work overall, keep it up.
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Thanks dude, :D
i like fast, and sorry im not on msn too much anymore, :(
i miss all of you NGers, XD
It's a nice little rock tune. perfect for what it was made for:)
Couldn't give it tens all around because well I a credit tune doesn't really prove that much... I think that you improved your quaily a bit wich I commentented on earlier.
And ofc if it's not to much to ask, check my latest stuff out, the zero voters have been bitching me lately:P
No Probs dude! I see what you're saying it is too short to prove a lot, however I'm seriously considering extending this to a full length tune, Be sure to check back when it's done!
and I'll be over to review, so be prepared!
you got something going there. But I do think that you need to do some work on it. The quality is so so it sounds like you got an filter over the entire song. I know it's not easy to get that right, but toy around with the EQ and soon you'll discover some tricks. (I could share some if you want). And well some parts of the song isn't really to my taste. but overall a good idea, just needs some polishing and it will be great:)
Voted 5 so that the 0 voters get less power:)
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Hey man I really like this one:) like everything about it really. Hmm listened to it on a pair of crappy headphones at work so I can't really comment on its quality which is what I usually do:) but unless you made some kind of fatal mistake I guess thats good too.
check my latest song <Fusion> out.
I changed my name again but I think you can figure out who it is:)
K i think i did now.
Um, hi! lol.
Hey thought I should check some of your other songs out even though you said you said you wanted the oppinion on the technology song.
Just wanted to say that you can disregard what I said in that review about it sounding oddly filtered, this don't suffer of the same issue, so you obviously know how to do it.
About this song. well I usually hate hip hop, but what I can say is that this sounds better than many commersial hip hop songs. so maybe you can sell beats to rappers, I actaully think you could:)
Keep it up.
Well this song isn't really hip hop, its reggaeton, with some hip hop flavor to it. I do think i can sell beats to rappers, but right now i just wanna give back to all the people. Thnx for listening and reviewing my song.
Great at a club
This is something that would work very well at rave party. But just to listen to it isn't really that enyojable after about 3 minutes. If it was me that made it I would make some kind of change somewhere around there.
I downloaded the higher quality version, but it would still benefit from even higher quality. I understand that you need to lower the quality with the NG version but with the original mixdown I recommend anything above 200kbps, (I usually sample at 256kbps) you'll get huge files but it's worth it:)
One more thing about that. I can't put my finger on it but the mix sound a bit well.. quiet. and like there is some kind of very small filter on it. dunno really. but I would look into that:)
Hmm now it kinda sounded like I didn't like it, but I do, I like the synths and the arrangement, I'm just trying to be constructive.
keep it up! I hope you blow my mind with your next song:)
I did think about rendering it to a higher bitrate but 128kbs is like 7mbs by itself, and i really didn't need such clarity for my song, 320kbs i think is a bit excessive. I like songs that just take you in and entrace you, no real complex melody, i never really liked that. So i guess that comes out on my music. I do try to do different styles though, im learning!
Thnx for looking it over. i'll be sure to keep checking your stuff out.
Nice song like your melodies and the general idea. The only thing that lowers its score for me is the quality of the sounds. and as Allen said, you would benefit from learning some more about the EQ.
Otherwise its good. keep it up.
Cheers Man! all points noted Allen has explained further with some helpful pointers, which I shall be reminding myself of in future
Thanks for your review! Much appreciated
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